Comments on: blank canvas http://www.usayd.com/2008/01/08/blank-canvas/ Peace, Justice and Freedom in Words they Flow Fri, 09 Jan 2009 20:52:30 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.5.1 By: the rose which grew from concrete http://www.usayd.com/2008/01/08/blank-canvas/#comment-832 the rose which grew from concrete Wed, 09 Jan 2008 23:06:21 +0000 http://usayd.com/new/?p=611#comment-832 love this one think i'd change this bit: I always knew life was a narrow path to follow Heart beats frantically, strong feeling of sorrow to: I always knew life was a narrow path to follow Heart beat feels hollow, strong feeling of sorrow Guess thats just because i feel that way. love this one think i’d change this bit:

I always knew life was a narrow path to follow
Heart beats frantically, strong feeling of sorrow

to:

I always knew life was a narrow path to follow
Heart beat feels hollow, strong feeling of sorrow

Guess thats just because i feel that way.

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