http://www.usayd.com/2008/08/01/limbo/ Design & development, ranging from dynamic websites to intricate print media and everything in between. Sat, 02 Jan 2010 12:50:21 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.usayd.com/2008/08/01/limbo/comment-page-1/#comment-21863 Usayd Tue, 19 Aug 2008 12:26:01 +0000 http://www.usayd.com/?p=670#comment-21863 thanks for the feedback. thanks for the feedback.

]]> http://www.usayd.com/2008/08/01/limbo/comment-page-1/#comment-21823 Badeea Mon, 18 Aug 2008 22:09:51 +0000 http://www.usayd.com/?p=670#comment-21823 lol- i thought it was two poems- what an idiot am i! lol i do like the mirage section better than the limbo section. i like the line "water doesn't exist at the place first sighted"- tells me that u have to wok hard sometimes to get to the water but its worth it in the end- so thats a good little moral there. but i think its a little contradictory how u say "there is no end"- but then u say "as the end of time arrives". and the line "plan for worst is the way they say"- i'm not too keen on- because it generates a rather negative outlook to life. and i don't know what u man by the last night-"like the broken sky" - so it would be nice if u explained although i know u don't like to do that. there i hope this brief analysis is good enough for u. :-) lol- i thought it was two poems- what an idiot am i! lol
i do like the mirage section better than the limbo section.
i like the line “water doesn’t exist at the place first sighted”- tells me that u have to wok hard sometimes to get to the water but its worth it in the end- so thats a good little moral there.
but i think its a little contradictory how u say “there is no end”- but then u say “as the end of time arrives”.
and the line “plan for worst is the way they say”- i’m not too keen on- because it generates a rather negative outlook to life.
and i don’t know what u man by the last night-”like the broken sky” – so it would be nice if u explained although i know u don’t like to do that.
there i hope this brief analysis is good enough for u.

]]> http://www.usayd.com/2008/08/01/limbo/comment-page-1/#comment-19273 Usayd Fri, 01 Aug 2008 14:29:37 +0000 http://www.usayd.com/?p=670#comment-19273 lets have a read? lets have a read?

]]> http://www.usayd.com/2008/08/01/limbo/comment-page-1/#comment-19272 pink Fri, 01 Aug 2008 13:54:58 +0000 http://www.usayd.com/?p=670#comment-19272 finally :) lol i wrote one called limbo last night/this morning as well.. finally
lol i wrote one called limbo last night/this morning as well..

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